We are holding each others hand
You and I walking side by side
In a very nice and sleepy
Countryside neighborhood
Reaching our destination - an antebellum
House for you - a present from me
Oh how you smiled with delight
As you squeezed my hand tight
And pulled me into your loving arms
And planted the sweetest kiss on my mouth
I so cherished the moment for I -
Know that this moment won't last for long
For I was just daydreaming
hey i can notice the great improvement on how you cut your lines and the rhythms too. way to go!
ReplyDeleteyehey! words of praise from my sempai! thank you! there's no room for anything; only for improvement. hehehe
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