Prison
Where all derelicts of society are locked up
Where Freedom is only a Fantasy
All movements are inhibited -
By bars - chains -
Dungeon
Where they put the most notorious -
Of all the other convicts.
The meanest of the mean -
The escapee wannabe's -
The stubborn ones
Solitary
The ultimate freedom curtailer -
For the most dangerous of all -
Convicts
nice poem. in the first line of each, instead of - you use : or simply omit -. avoid too much - per line also for it will be read continuously since you put . in the succeeding lines.
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Thanks padli. will do.
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